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 Introduction
 ============
 
-Generally, there are a lot of different ways and opinions on how to teach people
+Generally, there are many different ways and opinions on how to teach people
 something new. However, most people agree that a hands-on experience is one of
 the best ways to make the human brain remember a new skill. Learning must be
 entertaining and interactive, with fast and frequent feedback. Some kinds of
@@ -38,22 +38,28 @@ Analysis
 
 ### Assignment
 
-The major goal of this project is to create grading application that will be
+The major goal of this project is to create a grading application that will be
 used for programming classes at the Faculty of Mathematics and Physics, Charles
-University. However, the application should have modular design and be easily
+University. However, the application should be designed in a modular fashion so 
-extendable, so other kinds of usage will be possible.
+that it can be easily extended to make other ways of using it possible.
 
-This project have a great starting point -- there is an old grading system used
+The project has a great starting point -- there is an old grading system 
-these days at out university, so its mistakes and weaknesses can be adressed, and
+currently used at our university, so its mistakes and weaknesses can be 
-a lot of teachers willing to use the new system. The ideas were collected both
+adressed. Furthermore, many teachers are willing to use and test the new system. 
-from our personal experience with old system and from teachers' requests.
+Following requirements were collected both from our personal experience with 
+CodEx and from teachers' requests.
 
-**Common grading system features:**
+**Basic grading system requirements:**
+
+These are features that are necessary for any system for evaluation of 
+programming homework assignments used in a university programming course. 
+
+@todo maybe group the requirements by role (student might want to do XYZ...)
 
 - creating exercises including textual description, sample inputs and correct
   reference outputs (for example "sum all numbers from given file and write the
   result to the standard output")
-- assign the exercise to a group of users with some additional properties set
+- assigning the exercise to a group of users with some additional properties set
   (deadlines, etc.)
 - user interface for interaction with the system, mainly for showing assigned
   exercises, uploading solution sources and presenting evaluated results
@@ -63,23 +69,36 @@ from our personal experience with old system and from teachers' requests.
 - user management with support of roles (at least two -- _student_ and
   _supervisor_)
 - administrative interface for manual checking of solutions, overriding
-  automatically assigned amount of points and view overall statistics about
+  automatically assigned amount of points and viewing of overall statistics 
-  users
+  about users
+
+CodEx satisfies all these requirements and a few more that originate from the 
+way courses are organized at our university -- for example, users have roles 
+(_student_, _supervisor_ and _administrator_) that determine their capabilities 
+in the system and students are divided into groups that correspond to lab 
+groups. 
+
+However, further requirements arose during the ten year long lifetime of the old 
+system. There are not many ways to improve it from the perspective of a student, 
+but a lot of feature requests came from administrators and supervisors. 
+Collected ideas were mostly gathered from meetings with faculty staff involved 
+with the current system.
+
+**Drawbacks of CodEx:**
+
+@todo merge this with the CodEx entry in "Related work"
 
-Schools and educating institutions needs a bit specific setup. System
+- there has to be a separate installation of the system for some courses (e.g. 
-configuration needs to reflect structure of courses and user hierarchy
+  Java programming and .NET programming) that do not use the same sandbox as the 
-(_student_, _supervisor_ and _administrator_). These requirement are satisfied
+  majority of courses.
-with currently used system at the university, but there are some new ones, which
-escalated during long production lifetime of old system. From student
-perspective there are not many thing to improve, but a lot of them come from
-administrator and supervisors. Collected ideas are mainly from meeting with
-faculty staff involved in current system.
 
-**Wanted features for new system:**
+**Requested features for the new system:**
 
-- login through university authentication system
+- logging in through a university authentication system (e.g. LDAP)
 - support for multiple programming environments at once to avoid unacceptable
   workload for administrator and hardware occupation
+- elimination of the need to maintain separate installations for Java and C# 
+  programming courses
 - localization (both UI and exercises)
 - Markdown support for exercise texts
 - tagging exercises and search by tags
@@ -88,7 +107,8 @@ faculty staff involved in current system.
 - resubmit solution with saving all (including temporary) results
 - mark one student solution as accepted (used for grading this assignment)
 - web and command-line submit tool
-- SIS integration for fetching personal user data
+- SIS (university information system) integration for fetching personal user 
+  data
 - plagiarism detection
 - advanced low-level evaluation flow configuration with high-level abstraction
   layer for ordinary configuration cases
@@ -105,7 +125,7 @@ To find out current state in the field of automatic grading systems, let's do a
 short survey at universities, programming contests or online tools.
 
 
-### Related projects
+### Related work
 
 First of all, some code evaluating projects were found and examined. It is not
 a complete list of such evaluators, but just a few projects which are used