Final tweaks?

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--- a/en/chap01.tex
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@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ important disadvantages. Table~\ref{t:comparison1} summarizes known approaches.
 Birdvisu aims to be a rather simple tool for small to medium-sized network
 systems, where it is impractical to deploy complex monitoring and visualisation
 infrastructure. We want to especially help in homelabs and community wireless
-networks\X{glos}, but any OSPF deployment should be able to make use of our
+networks, but any OSPF deployment should be able to make use of our
 project.

 Also, since we do not require any server apart from a routing daemon, which can
--- a/en/header.tex
+++ b/en/header.tex
@ -51,8 +51,8 @@

 \lstset{basicstyle=\ttfamily\footnotesize,captionpos=b,columns=fullflexible,numbers=left,numberstyle=\color{gray}\footnotesize}

-\def\X#1{\textcolor{red}{[#1]}}
-\def\XXX#1{\par\smallskip\noindent \textcolor{red}{[#1]}}
+%\def\X#1{\textcolor{red}{[#1]}}
+%\def\XXX#1{\par\smallskip\noindent \textcolor{red}{[#1]}}

 %%% Basic information on the thesis

--- a/en/intro.tex
+++ b/en/intro.tex
@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ When it is important to distinguish, we explicitly write \emph{IPv4} or
 \emph{IPv6}. IP may also denote an IP address, as in \uv{a router has an IP},
 but this usage should be clear from the context.

-We distinguish between \emph{routing} as the act of finding next hops\X{glos},
+We distinguish between \emph{routing} as the act of finding next hops,
 and \emph{forwarding}, the act of sending a received packet through an
 interface according to a \emph{routing table}. (Whether the routing table is
 distinct from the network-layer forwarding table is an implementation detail.)
--- a/en/thesis.tex
+++ b/en/thesis.tex
@ -76,11 +76,19 @@ All attachments to this thesis are only in the electronic version. Readers of th

 \section{Birdvisu}\label{att:birdvisu}

-Attached as of commit \verb|4abc3cc8|. Available online at \url{https://gitea.ledoian.cz/LEdoian/birdvisu}.
+The Birdvisu project is located in the \verb|birdvisu| directory of the attached ZIP file.
+
+Attached as of commit \verb|4abc3cc8|.
+
+Available online at \url{https://gitea.ledoian.cz/LEdoian/birdvisu}.

 \section{Gennet}\label{att:gennet}

-Attached as of commit \verb|31bea730|. Available online at \url{https://gitea.ledoian.cz/LEdoian/gennet}.
+The Gennet project is located in the \verb|gennet| directory of the attached ZIP file.
+
+Attached as of commit \verb|4d604955|.
+
+Available online at \url{https://gitea.ledoian.cz/LEdoian/gennet}.

 \openright
 \end{document}